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Evasion: you bury the duplicated assignment in vague language. No one can tell what the concern is.
Explain a substantiated concern plainly, including limitations that make the account less dramatic.
Readiness to state relevant truth plainly when concealment would be easier.
Candor makes the relevant truth plain when concealment would be easier. It gives a substantiated concern a sentence someone can understand and answer. Its plainness includes limitations: a qualification that changes the meaning belongs with the claim, even when it makes the story less dramatic.
Try a practice
The report says, “A certain degree of allocation ambiguity may have occurred.” What happened is simpler: two people were assigned the same donated bicycle. You replace the fog with that sentence, then add the limit: you do not yet know how the duplication arose. The bicycle finally emerges from its administrative weather.
An invented illustrative scene.
Candor gives a concern a recognizable subject. The reader need not decipher whether anything happened or what needs answering.
A clear statement can support a specific response: check the assignments, correct the duplication, explain the remaining uncertainty. Plainness helps people work on the matter rather than on your phrasing.
Evasion: you bury the duplicated assignment in vague language. No one can tell what the concern is.
Plain account: you name the duplication and state that its cause is unconfirmed. The fact and its limit remain together.
Blunt accusation: you call the duplication theft without evidence of that intent. Forceful language changes the claim beyond what is known.
Candor is not a contest to produce the sharpest sentence. Plain language may be both courteous and unmistakably firm.
Imagine an employee who can substantiate that a record was changed after a review. “The entry changed after the review” is an intelligible concern. Naming which part changed and acknowledging an unconfirmed cause makes the account plainer still. A euphemism can obscure it; an unsupported motive can overstate it. This is an invented descriptive example, not a disclosure assignment.
Say which promised task remains undone rather than hint at general disappointment.
Identify the entry needing correction and the reason, without guessing a motive.
Integrity aligns your conduct with a principle; Candor gives relevant truth a plain voice.
Candor clarifies what appropriately needs saying; Discretion judges what information belongs with that recipient.
An unsupported allegation does not become sound by being direct. Bluntness counterfeits Candor when forceful delivery earns praise for a claim whose basis is missing; state the known concern and its limits plainly.
Elegant vagueness is a counterfeit of Candor: professional phrasing can hide whether anything happened. The fitting account lets a reader identify the duplicated assignment without deciphering administrative fog.
Rewrite a harmless fictional concern in two plain sentences: what happened, and what remains unknown.
Read the sentences for unnecessary accusation and unnecessary fog. Use made-up information if a real example would expose someone.
Candor does not require indiscriminate disclosure or unsafe confrontation. Use harmless or invented material; privacy, confidentiality and possible retaliation matter in choosing what to say and where.
Candor does not require indiscriminate disclosure or unsafe confrontation. Use harmless or invented material; privacy, confidentiality and possible retaliation matter in choosing what to say and where.
These pages offer ideas for reflection and character practice, not professional advice. Choose practices suited to your circumstances and abilities. You may adapt, pause, or skip an exercise; putting yourself or someone else at risk is not proof of virtue.
About these practicesSeven readings, one for each day. All remain available here. Historical arguments and fictional dialogue are identified in their source notes.
… But I am sure you will agree with me that truth should be the first consideration.
Henrik Ibsen · An Enemy of the People
(zero-based); exact span 92–174
Hovstad, fictional dialogue · 1882 play; R. Farquharson Sharp English translation, preserved Gutenberg 2446 digital edition
R. Farquharson Sharp English translation
Hovstad appeals to truth while pursuing political opportunity, and later abandons the doctor. The sentence must therefore be read as a test of candor’s practice: a plain appeal to truth does not establish truthful conduct.
To speak disrespectfully of love is, I know, high treason against sentiment and fine feelings; but I wish to speak the simple language of truth, and rather to address the head than the heart. …
Mary Wollstonecraft · A Vindication of the Rights of Woman
(zero-based); exact span 0–191
Mary Wollstonecraft · 1792 work; preserved Gutenberg 3420 digital edition
Wollstonecraft chooses the simple language of truth over sentiment’s expectations. Candor similarly makes a concern recognizable without relying on theatrical force.
… and, anxious to render my sex more respectable members of society, I shall try to avoid that flowery diction which has slided from essays into novels, and from novels into familiar letters and conversation.
Mary Wollstonecraft · A Vindication of the Rights of Woman
(zero-based); exact span 685–891
Mary Wollstonecraft · 1792 work; preserved Gutenberg 3420 digital edition
Wollstonecraft explicitly resists flowery diction in her argument. Removing administrative fog lets the reader see the duplicated bicycle assignment rather than admire the sentence.
… And the act which I accomplish here is only a revolutionary means of hastening the explosion of truth and justice. …
Émile Zola · J’Accuse, excerpts in Émile Zola, Novelist and Reformer
(zero-based); exact span 408–522
Émile Zola, J’Accuse as translated and excerpted by Vizetelly · 1898 letter; historical English extracts in Vizetelly’s 1904 biography, preserved Gutenberg 57546 digital edition
Ernest Alfred Vizetelly English translation
Zola states the purpose he assigns to his public letter instead of hiding its intended effect. Candor similarly makes the concern’s purpose intelligible; the catalog does not prescribe his revolutionary method or promise an explosion of truth.
… But every man was constrained by so much sincerity to the like plaindealing, and what love of nature, what poetry, what symbol of truth he had, he did certainly show him. …
Ralph Waldo Emerson · Essays — First Series
(zero-based); exact span 2803–2973
Ralph Waldo Emerson · 1841 collection; preserved Gutenberg 2944 digital edition
Emerson depicts sincerity drawing plain dealing from others in friendship. A plain statement can invite an intelligible answer; it does not guarantee that a recipient will respond candidly.
… I do not need a friend to change his opinions with me and to assent to me in everything, my shadow will do that better, but I need one that will speak the truth and help me with his judgement. …
Plutarch · Morals: Ethical Essays
(zero-based); exact span 1337–1529
An imagined speaker in Plutarch’s argument · 1888 George Bell and Sons translation; current Gutenberg 23639 transcription
Translation by Arthur Richard Shilleto
Plutarch’s imagined speaker wants truthful judgment rather than an agreeing shadow. Candor contributes something more than pleasant assent when a relevant concern needs saying.
… Not truth is the standard, but the politic and the reputable. …
John Morley · On Compromise
(zero-based); exact span 1364–1425
John Morley · 1874 work; preserved Gutenberg 11557 digital edition
Morley contrasts truth with what is politically acceptable and reputable. Plain wording resists letting institutional comfort decide whether the duplicated assignment can be named.
Choose this approved collection as an optional workbook program, or select individual virtues in My Virtues.